The Box

Anne is going to be the loose sort of character--perhaps acting as rivalry later on as the affair between Ellen and the Marquis (the name reminds me so much of ...

An interesting story, especially for one so very short. Commentary on how kids are easily influenced by adults, and gain their habits and mannerisms—as well as their bigotry. Just a ...

This has interesting potential. Once again, this boils down to a simple show-not-tell type of critique. You're simply going on and telling us things that happened. It's the reason why ...

I know what you said in your last post, but I placed so much effort into writing a critique. I don't want it to go to a waste. ;_; There's ...

I will make a promise to you. If you space this post out, I will review the work. Currently, the entire work is entire bulky and straining to decipher. No ...

Usually people fight here to rid most poems of abstract nouns. I see it appearing all the time, almost to the point where I was considering swooping down into every ...

It's very nice, but I have some suggestions. Some people think the poem is long and intimidating to look at, and while it is in your right to make your ...